Some State of Happiness, for Beth

Dec 28, 2007 00:42

Title: Some State of Happiness
Setting: Modern
Genre: Romance
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary:
Author's Notes: You should all thank Leslie for being of so much help to me with this ( Read more... )

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bethyb00sh January 4 2008, 14:33:35 UTC
Oh, did you know this is my fourth time reading this before finally being able to sit down and say something other than, "GUH!"

I have to say that the "Then"s and "Nows" etc were a VERY good touch! It effectively built background for the characters. But I love the characters' dialogue the most. How sophisticated!

Thank you so much for the delightful read, mystery writer (though I have a good idea who you areee :D)

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