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I Fixed It

Nov 03, 2010 21:44

Title: I Fixed It
Fandom: Brothers & Sisters
Word Count: 1,234
Summary: The Kevin/Scotty storyline for the episode "An Ideal Husband" didn't sit with me. It seemed to contradict all we have learned about Scotty. So, to appease myself, I decided to rewrite that part of the episode so that it was something I could see happening.
Spoilers: Could be ( Read more... )

fandom: brothers & sisters, miscellany: slash (canon), pov: 3rd person, writing style: fan fiction, community: walkers_fics, written: 2010

Comments 4

lidlesseye728 November 5 2010, 18:06:26 UTC

Tea scene? SO Nora!

Again, it seems a little rushed in scenes. Specifically, Justin going to find Scotty. And what was Scotty doing outside, anyway? And conversation with Marcus about leaving.

willows_whiten November 16 2010, 00:43:33 UTC

Yay! See, I'm starting to be able to channel the other characters :).

Probably partially because I wrote this between calls at work, and partially because I had certain parts I wanted to get down before I forgot them. How much did you want out of Justin searching for Scotty? Don't ask me what Scotty was doing outside, ask the original writer; I borrowed that from the episode. And what did you want from the convo about him leaving? You mean the part where Scotty's telling him to leave, right? That's not really a convo as much as a monologue because Scotty was ordering Marcus to leave, not talking with him about if he should.

missiexox November 6 2010, 23:24:07 UTC

Thankyou for rewriting the "episode"...it didnt sit well with me either because i know Scotty is a better person than that! enjoyed reading it!

willows_whiten November 16 2010, 00:39:07 UTC

You're welcome! Yeah, it felt like really bad fan fiction to me, and made me sad. Glad you liked it!