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Contest 3--Park Bench

Jan 12, 2006 21:20

Title: Park Bench
Author: enigma731
Feedback: This post.
Pairing: Roger/Mimi, although not really yet
Word Count: 1,057
Rating: PG13
Genre: General
Summary: That day, she was just a girl cutting class to explore the city.
Notes: The omission of names in this piece is absolutely intentional. I ( Read more... )

challenge 3

Comments 4

elvensorceress January 13 2006, 07:45:09 UTC

Awwww. *loves on the Roger/Mimi*
I loved this. It was so cute!

<3

electrakitty74 January 13 2006, 13:30:02 UTC

Awww! Extreme cuteness! Hooray!

toofarfromgrace January 13 2006, 15:26:43 UTC

The omission of names works perfectly for this, and your writing flows beautifully. The description of Roger made me smile - short and concise, but it brings to mind exactly the right image. And flustered Roger is always a good thing, especially when Mimi's doing the flustering. Sweet and so cute. I love it.

_starrystarry January 14 2006, 00:42:17 UTC

This is really just wonderful. They both seem very in character, even though it's pre-RENT. I especially loved the "'Do you own this park?' 'Nah, just the world'" bit. Seems like a very Roger-ish answer. Also, "I'm With You" is a great song :)