Comments | speed_delko: Fic: Eclipse ; PG-13 ; 1/?

jaded_fae in speed_delko

Fic: Eclipse ; PG-13 ; 1/?

Oct 10, 2007 02:26

Title: Eclipse

Non-Sylum

Author: Victoria

Fandom: CSI: Miami

Summary: People’s lives crash and collide everyday and no one ever pays it any heed. Yet sometimes they eclipse over each other in the most unusual ways and you can’t help but sit up and take notice.

Soon to be slash, Speed/?

Rating: FRT, PG-13

Beta: My biffle, Lauren, the ever-helpful Travis ( ( Read more... )

author: jaded_fae, rating: pg13

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jaded_fae July 18 2008, 05:19:08 UTC

I actually have several chapters written for this fic and I'm in the process of actually using the FF.Net account I created ages ago. I haven't since updated on LJ because of the lack of reviews.

Thank you so much for reading though! I'll archive this comment and let you know when the story is up on FF.Net.

jetpack_angel July 19 2008, 18:02:06 UTC

This is a new twist. I'm liking it. You're a vivid writer and it's those little momentary steps into memory that have such an incredible impact on the story. Speed wants his puppy back, but 'dad' just couldn't 'fess up to it.

I can't help wondering if H set Tim on this case because H already knew about the connection, and H figured that not only would Tim not give up but he would also get some answers.

*pounds fists on desk* Me want more! Me want more! Don't leave us hanging!