The Carver (1/8)

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Title: The Carver
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Horror
Characters: Dean, Sam
Pairings: none
Disclaimer: I do not own or lay claim to anything related to Supernatural.
Summary: Something is carving people up like jack-o-lanterns. When the boys take a case on Halloween, Dean revisits high school from a new perspective, Sam explores his hatred

Comments

[jude_91]

I enjoyed this. Can't wait to read more!

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Thanks, glad you like it so far!

[stars91]

This is a really great start! Interesting case-file. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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I'm glad you're enjoying the case!

[bellasianna]

I'm not sure how I missed this before I spotted chapter 6, but I like!
It has a real episode feel to it already adn I'm looking forward to reading more :)
*goes to to read next chapters*

[iamstealthyone]

Good opening to the story. I really like how you wrote Audrey and used her to introduce the hunt. And yikes on the hunt. That carving-up-faces thing is quite icky. *shudders*

Favorite lines:

Plink!

His eyes were gone. In their place someone had carved triangles into his skin and scooped out the flesh, leaving a mangled mess of red behind.

Plink!

His nose had been cut off, leaving the bloody outline of an upside-down triangle.

Plink!

His lips had been cut away,

I really like how you wrote this section, alternating between the “plink” sound and the description.

Dean planted his hands on his knees and stood up,

Good detail.

Actually, Dean had been to prison, too, and he thought that might even be a bit better than high school. At least in prison you didn’t have to pretend to pay attention and you got free meals.

*snickers* Trust Dean to feel that way. *snickers again*