Lacerated Sky

Jun 03, 2007 18:25

This is the non-flocked comment post for the story Lacerated Sky, which is rated Adult 17+, so mind the rating, please.

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PLEASE BE WARNED, THERE ARE SPOILERS FOR THE STORY IN THE COMMENTS!!

lacerated sky - final

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zehlyah June 8 2007, 02:49:21 UTC
WOW I'm impressed!! I was so ready to keep reading when I reached the end. Can't wait to find out what happens :)

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sailorhathor June 9 2007, 01:48:58 UTC
Eee, thank you. ^_^ I have lots of plans. Hopefully, I'll be able to get the next chapter out soon.

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cameragrl June 9 2007, 01:20:25 UTC
You are amazing! Amazing do you hear me? Please write more of this fantastic hot story. You have Deans voice down. I look forward to more chapters.

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sailorhathor June 9 2007, 01:52:57 UTC
Thank you soooo much for saying all this; I really needed it. I want to get more chapters done very soon.

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cameragrl June 14 2007, 14:30:10 UTC
I just re-read chapters 1-3. I know I commented already but I have to tell you that the humor and the small bits of angst are so well done. I even feel you've capture Lenore despite the fact she's barely fleshed out in Bloodlust. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. It's also a threesome which is so rare!

But dude, seriously. WHERE'S CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!!!!

your devoted fan,
cameragrl

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sailorhathor June 14 2007, 23:34:24 UTC
Thank you! ^_^ Yeah, we didn't get a lot out of Lenore, but she did come off as sort of a sassy leader type, so I'm working from that. I could also see her bridging the gap between Sam and Dean when they couldn't talk to each other.

>>WHERE'S CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!!!!<<

COMING SOON!!!!! Hehehehe. Actually, the more comments like this that I get, the more I want to work on a story.

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sailorhathor September 14 2007, 22:33:45 UTC
Incase you didn't see on any of the communities, chapter 4 is now out. Here you go!

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Lacerated Sky steffsp June 29 2007, 07:07:16 UTC
Fantastic. Really enjoyed reading and the writing was excellent. HOT is the word for it. PHEW!!!

Poor Dean if it comes to it Sam is gonna have to turn him to keep him alive. OUCH in a good way LOL Steffs

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Re: Lacerated Sky sailorhathor June 29 2007, 23:22:09 UTC
Thanks so much for your comments! I'm glad you're enjoying it. There will be lots more to come. *eyebrow wiggle*

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trueshellz August 26 2007, 16:47:47 UTC
wow
just read all 3 chapters
and am loving it
its awesome

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sailorhathor August 26 2007, 17:33:03 UTC
Thanks! I'm working on chapter 4 right now.

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