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Doctor Who: "To forgive your past and simply be mine"

Jun 08, 2011 12:11

Title: "to forgive your past and simply be mine"
Chapter: 1 of 1.
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): River/Eleven.
Genre: Romance.
Summary: Spoilers for 6x07 - "Now, Amelia Song, I'm going to tell you a story."
Author's Note: This is baby!fic. So those of you that can't wrap your heads around the idea of the Doctor with children, firstly - What's ( Read more... )

river/doctor, river song, doctor who, eleven, amelia song, river/eleven

Comments 34

egalitarianmuse June 8 2011, 02:34:58 UTC

I just cried all the tears, but that's okay, because that was so very sweet. That's exactly what I want for those two. Fantastic story!

speckleberry June 8 2011, 02:41:40 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! That makes me feel really good about it. It's only my second River/Eleven fic, so I'm still coming to terms with writing them, hehe.

gidget_zb June 8 2011, 02:35:43 UTC

And like she knew he'd seen her end - even though he'd never say - she'd suffered the heartbreak of witnessing his as well - it had to be that way, because she could never imagine anything but death, forcing them apart.

*rips heart from chest and flings it to your feet*

Oh god. I never thought of it that way. Til death do them part. Now I kind of want the deaths to stick.

DAMMIT HANNAH.

This is adorable, and sad and wistful and beautiful. And don't think I didn't see that hair!porn moment (Amelia and I approve) thrown in just for me.

speckleberry June 8 2011, 02:40:13 UTC

Oh, now that's what your favourite lines are? Iiiinteresting. Hahaa, you never looked at it that way? Ah. Well, hee. I finally showed YOU something not the other way around. WIN. I still kind of don't want the deaths to stick, but that'd be only because I want their story to continue. They'll never part though, as long as they're alive. That's my take, anyway. So many people write that the Doctor just continues on, after she's too young to know him. But I don't think that's the case.

Hehe, the Hair!Porn was totally for you, chicky. roll in it! HAHAHA.

coffeesuperhero June 8 2011, 03:43:55 UTC

God, I'm a sucker for babyfic. It's like a happy suckerpunch to the heart. Nice work! Adorable! Wistful! Everything it should be. ♥

speckleberry June 8 2011, 03:57:13 UTC

Oh, gotta love a sucker for a baby!fic. Alex's comments about the cot were just screaming for it. LOL. So I'm glad I did okay ;)

And I just read your fic, so, off I go to bask in the pretty and tell you it's awesome ;)

coffeesuperhero June 8 2011, 04:02:28 UTC

You did! This was lovely. :D And yes, her comments made baby!fic a total necessity. Alex, you scamp.

Aw, thank you. ♥

speckleberry June 8 2011, 04:04:22 UTC

Awww, thank you! Because you know, being this is my very second River/Eleven fic, getting "You done good!" from people like you and Gidget, who write so beautifully, it makes a girl feel good!

Thanks so much!!! ♥♥♥

alliemulder2 June 8 2011, 05:14:28 UTC

Greatness, I love this!!

speckleberry June 8 2011, 05:26:28 UTC

HAHA, LOL. Your icon is contradictory to your statement. I love that! And thank you!

brittania June 8 2011, 05:18:31 UTC

this is absolutely stunning. nothing can ever compare to how perfect this fic is, oh my god.

speckleberry June 8 2011, 05:27:41 UTC

Oh, wow, really? Wow, thank you. *overwhelmed*