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'Dulcet' Chapter 1/1

Sep 30, 2010 12:08

Title: "Dulcet"
Chapter: 1 of 1.
Rating: PG
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Genre: Romance/Angst
Summary: "It's the sounds, she notices, that make a place alien."
Author's Note: I will have you guys note, this was never intended to be shippy. It just kind of ran that way after it decided I was a bitch for not letting it be shippy. So it's done it's own ( Read more... )

romance, fanfic, angst, sga, john/elizabeth, introspective

Comments 5

krisrussel September 30 2010, 11:14:07 UTC

beautiful and perfect.
Thanks for sharing!

vickysg1 September 30 2010, 12:59:35 UTC

OH I LOVE THIS FIC! I love it so much!!!!!

I love the comparisons you make between Earth and Atlantis, and Atlantis is so quiet, so silent, and it's not easy to settle there.

I love the little things you mention like the floor, the no straighteners (and I'm damn glad she didn't think to bring them), or the all walking barefoot. I love that John came to see Elizabeth because he couldn't sleep. And that she couldn't sleep either. I love that he took her hand, just like that, for no reason. I love that once more, they found themselves outside, that after the balcony, they found this place.

I love that Elizabeth is thinking about Simon, and how she felt it was time to let go. And I love the comparisons she makes between holding Simon's hand and John's hand. As if it felt natural to hold John's hand.

I love the whole feeling in this fic. It was like Atlantis itself, calm, perfect. This fic is definitely one of my favourite of yours.

*tacklehugs*

ankareeda September 30 2010, 16:20:18 UTC

This was absolutely breathtaking and wonderful! ♥ I love all the details and how much love you did put into this! Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! ♥ So touching and perfect!

ext_3916390 December 1 2016, 20:35:13 UTC

So I've been reading your Fics for awhile now and have been finding a way to contact you. I don't know if you'll ever see this, but I'm absolutely grateful that you didn't purge your journal. It's 2016 and I'm reading your work from years ago and everything I've read is absolutely beautiful. Thank you

speckleberry June 22 2020, 11:05:28 UTC

Hi! I know this is a few years after your message, and you might not see it either. But I am thinking of moving all my stories over to AO3 or ff.net at some point. Just so you know - my name is Writtenndust over there.