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'Amarantine' Chapter One - Time

Aug 24, 2010 23:21

Title: "Amarantine"
Chapter: 1 of 10 - Time
Rating: PG
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama
Summary: "He didn't have forever, but you do. And you wonder time and time again, if that makes a difference."
Author's Note: This is my first Atlantis fic in quite a little while, and it feels nice to come home every once in a while, I've ( Read more... )

romance, angst, sga, drama, john/elizabeth, elizabeth

Comments 4

anuna_81 August 24 2010, 20:43:41 UTC

I want to let you know that I am about to go to bed - I can't read this now, but I am taking it with me tomorrow, and will comment as soon as I can.

I love you, for this, and for being an amazing friend. *HUGS*

anuna_81 August 25 2010, 15:06:28 UTC

It feels like moments before you can no longer remember what the face you wear looks like and whilst you know that your longing for him is what ties you to this place, you release it. With all of your heart, you let him go because he has been the burden you've carried and the last face you remembered since you stepped out onto the stars. You know that what you're doing, is ultimately a means to some kind of end, and you remember yourself telling Rodney that it'd never work if you intend to get something out of it.That's the quote that got stuck in my head ever since you've shown me the beginning of this. And it's beautiful, heartfelt and incredible. It may not sound true, but sometimes the time we need to make a change is incredibly long, almost an eternity. She is so stubborn, and I love that she lasts, and how the stars change before her eyes, and slowly she realizes it's time to let go and she lets the end come, because the end of something is a beginning of something else ( ... )

purpletrance August 26 2010, 14:58:30 UTC

Wow. I don't think I've ever read a fic like this before. I'm definitely going to be working on reading this throughout the next few days!

Absolutely beautifully written. It also makes me sad. It's a good sad, though. I just love Elizabeth.

Very nice. ♥

ankareeda August 29 2010, 15:42:29 UTC

Absolutely beautiful! ♥

You find it and you latch on to it and as you feel a warmth on your face that you haven't felt for far too long, his face is the last you see once more.

♥