Fanfic - "A Fool" - For alyssa22

[speckleberry]

Title: A Fool.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, Angst
Characters/Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Summary: He’d expected her to yell, expected her to scream and call for some SF’s to get him the “HELL” out of her room.
Warnings/Spoilers: None (Post ‘Hot Zone’)
Disclaimer: I don’t own Stargate Atlantis.
Author’s Note: Some old-school Sparky to welcome alyssa22 back into

Comments

[sapphs]

That was excellent. You definately cut it off at the write point and it flowed really well into the next bit. You ALMOST wrote smut! *wipes tear away*

I love this so much. Ahh the fluff and sweetness and Lizzie pacing like a lioness :P

[speckleberry]

You ALMOST wrote smut! *wipes tear away* - - LOL.

I'm so glad you liked it!

[oparu]

my speckles nearly wrote smut!!!!! *loves* my baby's growing up!

I love the not talking. The way she's in an entirely different emotional state than he expects. Very lovely indeed darling.

now, if only there was sex

[speckleberry]

my speckles nearly wrote smut!!!!! *loves* my baby's growing up! - - No!! Never! Save me!!! *whimpers* lol.

Hehehe, you may write the sex if you like. lol. So happy you liked all those points of it, very important.

[sometimesartist]

Hee. Almost smut? Whee. *is impressed*

[speckleberry]

Hehehe *pets*

[jackfan2]

Lovely! Lioness Elizabeth and John's healthy dose of fear really did show how much he did respect her and longed for her forgiveness. And when she exuded her dominance in bed.. *snerk* ... I held my breath. That was a perfect touch.

[speckleberry]

Lovely! Lioness Elizabeth - - She is very like that isn't she, very "queen of the pride".

So glad you like it, thank you.

[justhere1971]

I liked that you wrote her as the one to initiate the "almost-sex". Love it!

[speckleberry]

Thanks!