Fic: Fall Down Get Up Again (Fußball, Ye Olde Schweinski)

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Title: Fall down get up again
Fandom: Fußball
Pairing: Schweinsteiger/Podolski
Rating: R
Word count: ~1800
Summary: Lukas knew about wanting. It hurt.
A/N: Post-match Schweinski angst, as if anyone needed it after tonight. And to think my intention had been to write comfort!porn. But it'll get better, I promise!
Disclaimer: Not mine. All lies.

Comments

[sashatwen]

tbc? The hell yes tbc! You can not NOT give me TBC! Are you trying to kill me?

Ehm... anyhow. Just lovely. The introspective passage, where they are coming from, was lovely. You have a real gift for getting inside their fictional heads.

More, please? It is comforting to read. And we all need comfort.

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Thank you. I'm glad you found it realistic; I was just looking over some of the photos and the footage of them, and this just sort of sprang out fully formed from there. WHY, POLDI, WHY??? :( :(

But yes, I think there probably will have to be a continuation, although it might be some time in coming, not only because I am busy with Real Life but also because I feel like there's no quick fix for the kind of rift I've written them into here. :P

[slashfreak211]

Ohhh yes please more. THIS just made me cry, I was kinda expecting some kind of hzrt/comfort thing and now I´m kinda...crying.
Don´t get me wrong, it was awesome and their feelings were described beautiful, I just can´t really handle this right now.
More please. I´d kill for a happy end.

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Oh dear, I'm so sorry to have worsened the post-match awfulness. I swear I didn't intend to leave out the /comfort bit of hurt/comfort; the characters just sort of wouldn't let me, you know? But I am a happy ending kind of person, so there will probably eventually be one. Thank you for reading!

[the_muppet]

This was fantastic, really hope there's more to come =)

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Thank you! :) And I hope there will be too!

[demiana_kassio]

Damnit, I really must have a masochistic streak.

Fix them! ..please?

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I'll do my best! That's what fic is for, after all...

[wufff]

Really, really great. It's hard to write believable Schweinski these days but I think the only way to do it is your way. I don't have much else to say. Nothing to criticize. I could quote every sentence because every sentence is just brilliant and important and right. I hope you continue like this.

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Thank you for such a wonderful comment, I really appreciate it. Schweinski were my 2006 WC romance, and I couldn't let them go without a fight.