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Fic: The Womb of Joy (STXI, TOS, K/S)

May 01, 2010 13:37

Title: The Womb of Joy
Fandom: STXI and Generations
Pairing: K/S, twice
Rating: PG-13 for mpreg and other horribly mangled science
Word Count: ~2400
Summary: In the Nexus, fantasy gives rise to reality. For this prompt on the kink meme.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

( The man who came through the portal was fat, pregnant, and extremely emotional... )

fandom: star trek, series: 2x2=4, type: slash, pairing: kirk/spock, *fic

Comments 18

lihope May 1 2010, 18:39:56 UTC

I love this so much. I am glad there is a future for the baby! Good to see Kirk and spock X2 together!

spdfg May 2 2010, 17:38:00 UTC

Yeah, I think Kirk Prime would make a great dad. hough I can't imagine how weird the kid's life would be...

Thanks for commenting!

anonymous May 1 2010, 18:43:16 UTC

what a fascinating delivery of the nexus premise! i loved that nu!kirk and nu!spock didn't doubt that the other dad is spock (of whatever version)...the 'of course' reaction is a nice nod to the soulmates idea. and tos!kirk and tos!spock make saying each other's name and art form in itself--meaningful and full of unseen depths. also loved the whole 'our baby'--sure does open the possibilities. as spocks observed, jim is a determined individual. sequel...? =D

spdfg May 2 2010, 17:40:48 UTC

Thank you, what a lovely comment!

I have actually written the first part of a sequel, the premise of which is an attempted (and I stress 'attempted') foursome which includes pregnant!Old Jim. I'm not sure if I'll actually ever complete it or post it, though; we shall see.

jouissant May 2 2010, 02:15:51 UTC

"Old Spock and Fat Kirk," McCoy snorted. "What are you, nuclear warheads? This is illogical!"

I just snorted coffee out my nose. This line is amazing. OK, scrolling back up to finish the rest now.

jouissant May 2 2010, 02:36:37 UTC

Wow, ok, I really, really loved this. I swear, this fandom is conspiring to make me read mpreg. I just can't be squicked when the premise is this interesting and the writing so good!
The dialogue is flawless; all their voices are dead on. I definitely need to reread this when I'm not all beer-fuzzy, so I can think thinky thoughts, but for now: yay!

spdfg May 2 2010, 17:44:06 UTC

To be fair, this was not only fictional but also fictional-illusory mpreg, so perhaps it doesn't really count? Also I can't promise that it will make more sense if you read it sober. But thank you anyway, I'm glad you liked! :)

spirktrekker42 May 2 2010, 06:47:24 UTC

I always love it when people fix Generations, and this one is no exception. Loved it! Especially when nuKirk was like "You sure he's pregnant? I think he's just fat" Hahaha.

spdfg May 2 2010, 17:48:37 UTC

Heh thank you! Generations kinda sucked for me (see here for a succinct summary of my opinion) so I love fixits too :)