Fic: Theme and Variation (Fußball, Schweinski)

Sep 06, 2010 16:03

Title: Theme and Variation
Fandom: Fußball
Pairing: Schweinsteiger/Podolski
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~5000
Summary: Things change. Bastian deals with it. Hilariously, and like a boss. For this prompt on the kink meme: Poldi has a rape fantasy and confesses it to his longtime lover Schweini. Given that they normally have goofy, snuggly, giggly, rather ( Read more... )

fandom: football, type: slash, pairing: schweinski, *fic

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linndechir September 6 2010, 20:50:47 UTC
I already laughed madly when I read the prompt, and I had even more fun reading your fic. This is just hilarious, and very hot once they get going. I'm usually not a Schweinski-shipper, but them being all goofy and silly like in this one actually makes much more sense to me than the fics in which they're all romantic and tender. I loved this more than I can say. Especially Schweini's "I decided that we're gonna have kinky sex ... damn, how does kinky sex work?" Loved it. :)

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spdfg September 6 2010, 22:01:19 UTC
Thank you! :D I miss the Schweinski shenanigans so much I can't even tell you. And heh, icon (fraternal) twins! <3

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linndechir September 6 2010, 22:05:27 UTC
Yeah, they really were fun before Herr Schweinsteiger decided to grow up. Although, tbh, I really like grown-up Schweini. ;)

My icon? Well, it's more my first football OTP ever, and still a pairing I'm very uncompromising about. ;)

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spdfg September 6 2010, 22:17:31 UTC
Whups, I actually meant to use ^this icon. It only recently occurred to me that you can change them.

I was never really that keen on the Polish bros (as slash, that is) until I read bluetears07's Five times Miroslav and Lukas never met, but now I think I'm totally hooked. :P

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spdfg September 6 2010, 22:04:16 UTC
Thanks :D It's true about the damned women's magazines and their rubbish pagination, though. And half of those articles are actually real.

Anyway, now I have this out of the way, I promise your Lahm/Loew is next on my list!

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exsequar September 7 2010, 02:58:28 UTC
I was SO DELIGHTED when I saw you had written fic (even when you break my heart, you do it SO WELL) and this did not disappoint. I love how you write their dynamic so much. And the last paragraph was so unexpectedly, heartstoppingly poignant. So deftly done. Brava!

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spdfg September 7 2010, 04:59:03 UTC
You are too kind! I love getting feedback from thoughtful readers, so I'm glad to hear that the dynamic here worked for you. Actually, a good bit of it is based on that scene from the Serbia game in your icon -- that missed penalty certainly came with a wonderfully Schweinski-shaped silver lining. As long as it doesn't happen again!


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neuroticismette September 8 2010, 11:24:46 UTC
I swear, I read the summary and I couldn't imagine Schweinski/Rapefantasy but homeghed, you wrote it so well and managed to throw in the violent kink without discarding what is essentially lovable about these two men. I love it so much. ♥

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spdfg September 10 2010, 17:33:53 UTC
Thank you! I had some trouble with the concept myself -- the comic scenes were easy, but I found the actual sex nearly impossible to write -- so I'm glad you gave it a chance despite the unlikely scenario.

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neuroticismette September 11 2010, 16:23:04 UTC
I found the actual sex nearly impossible to write

I find that hard to believe. I mean, to be quite honest, I think you wrote it so well that while I found the sex scene interestingly hot, I also felt strangely weird reading it, you know, like I was watching something too personal or intimate. You made it quite believable and I like that.

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assassin_nariel September 8 2010, 16:26:41 UTC

Vanilla lil Lukas XDDD
Oh, this was not only hilarious, but it had that tender, emotional touch, and will have me grinning stupidly for the rest of the day at least. And still that undercurrent of sadness, with Lukas's family...

You're awesome. Keep up the good work!
And the porn! *_*

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spdfg September 10 2010, 17:49:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked ambivalent!Basti.

*blushes about the porn*

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assassin_nariel September 11 2010, 14:26:00 UTC
Awesome, it was. POOOOOOOOOOOORN!

Oh, Basti was brilliant. All "fuck yeah, we're doing it." Such a confused adorable piglet is what he is *squishes*
On a completely unrelated note, the house I'm moving into next week has a pig in the backyard. My very own Schweini. It's in a city and stuff, so the pig was kind of a surprise. It snored like a Bastian. Awesome, eh?

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spdfg September 11 2010, 16:14:32 UTC
A live pig? That's very impressive. Aren't they huge, or is this one of those miniature pet ones?

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