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luxluthor July 8 2010, 04:07:14 UTC
Awesome!!
Your spies are so brill.
Thansk for sharing:)

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spazzyskittles July 8 2010, 10:23:36 UTC
Well thank you for reading! I have a soft spot for this verse.

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starlesscities July 8 2010, 04:32:21 UTC
SO FUCKING GOOD

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spazzyskittles July 8 2010, 10:23:46 UTC
THANKS BB!

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the_best_wishes July 9 2010, 00:38:54 UTC
Fucking amazing. Just amazing. <3

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spazzyskittles July 9 2010, 10:36:40 UTC
Thank you so much!

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kaytvengeance July 9 2010, 01:36:20 UTC
I could read a million words of this verse, I love it to bits. So y'know, feel free to write a million.

You had me on tenterhooks for the whole of this, although I will brag that I was highly suspicious of Gabe because I am amazing like that. I love Ryan in this, the apparently confident strong guy who's actually really insecure, is rather endearing, even if it does mean he comes across as a dick sometimes.

Hurrah for you ♥

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kaytvengeance July 9 2010, 10:06:11 UTC
I was just rereading the last bit, and I have to wonder, will we ever find out what this question Ryan might have for Brendon is?

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spazzyskittles July 9 2010, 10:49:38 UTC
You never know. I might decide to write more.

And thank you! It's really hard to write suspenseful stories. And I like writing characters with ~layers to them like Ryan. Even Gabe is quite complex.

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pinkkchocolate July 9 2010, 02:24:51 UTC
idk if i told you yet but FYI I LOVE THIS IT IS AMAZING ETC

Also ily and stuff <33

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spazzyskittles July 9 2010, 10:50:04 UTC
LOL YOU DID BUT THANKS AGAIN BB ILY!

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