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[crystaldrake]

Title: Lonely
Rating: G
Pairings/Characters: Earth King Kuei/Long Feng
Warnings: none
Word Count: 124

He was wandering through the Earth Kingdom as a refugee. With each passing day Kuei couldn’t help but remember and miss his life at Ba Sing Se. But he didn’t miss being king or the luxury; he missed Long Feng. He missed the man who blindsided him

Comments

[chibirenamon]

I'm not sure how one wonders through the Earth Kingdom, but aside from that potential nitpicking (though it stuck out since it's the first sentence and the link text), it was quite nice! I think you summed up the Earth King nicely, really. He really liked Long Feng.

And you get Brownie Points for writing a "blind"-themed fic without Toph. ;)

[crystaldrake]

Opps, thanks for letting me know about typo.

Glad you enjoyed it.