Observation - Glee fic [2/2]

Nov 22, 2010 23:52



Title: Observation
Rating: PG-13; (light) R (Maybe)
Warnings: not as much Klaine as I would like; sexual harassment; not as much angst that the angst meme would probably like...
Word Count: 6,000
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee but wouldn’t that be awesome if I did?
Summary: Written for this prompt. Basically, Kurt is being sexually harassed and Puck ( Read more... )

klaine, fic, ensemble, kurt, glee

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tonks17 November 23 2010, 07:57:00 UTC
This was pretty damn awesome. I can't even pick a particular part I liked more. Maybe the beginning, where Puck's just... observing everyone? It just feels right.

laksdjskda I dunno what to say. It's all angsty and good and Puck. If that makes any sense.

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ladybugkay November 23 2010, 08:01:49 UTC
My favourite thing about outsider POV fics is the distance between what the observer knows - and notices - about what's going on, and what we know is happening with the observed. So despite there being a lack of overt Kurt/Blaine in this, it's all the moments we know are going on and that Puck doesn't know he is witnessing that really make this fic for me.

I loved it to pieces.

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shimering2 November 23 2010, 08:12:27 UTC
I don't comment much mainly because I have sucky expression and I don't really know how to comment "correctly". But this made me cry with tissues all over my computer table now.

I just couldn't stop reading and everything was just perfect. And I felt like I just wanted to give all the characters (especially Kurt) a freaking big hug and cry with them.

You are so awesome for being able to write something like this that can express so much emotions.

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spawn_hell November 23 2010, 18:39:19 UTC
Aww, thanks. I'm honored that you commented when you normally don't - it means a lot. :D I'm glad you enjoyed this!

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elles_lovely89 November 23 2010, 08:38:05 UTC
And I'm crying! This was so amazingly well written and in character, because even though Puck is a total badass he fucking cares about his Glee club. Him telling Schue off was just ahg;oadifjda yes. And his deep connections with all the other characters was sooo good. Brit and Santana, they were spot on girl. But I'm kind of sleep deprived and don't have anything remotely intelligent to say.
So I shall leave! And hope to read more from you :)

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pyro_semi November 23 2010, 08:43:37 UTC
You wrote a real piece of work that left me on the edge of my seat ( or bed) I really liked how you had written this from Puck's p.o.v. Also, Crawling from LP is genius to describe Kurt's feelings ( Now, I wish one of the boys sang this song to him). Oh, man all this leads me worried about what Karofsky could/will do to Kurt.

Thanks for writing this it made me experience a whirlwind of emotions.

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