Variations on a Theme

[sparrow_lately]

Oh em eff gee, fanfiction! Long fanfiction. Full of alternate universes, because I am easily bored.

Title: Variations on a Theme (or five ways it might have been)
Rating: I'm gonna say a hard PG-13
Words: ~8,000
Spoilers: Basically everything, but in particular for the Winchester-and-the-FBI arc, seasons 4/5, "What is and What Should Never Be."
Warnings

Comments

[tabaqui]

Oh, man. So heartbreaking and so damn *possible*.
*sniffle*

I particularly love the bits of the 'bible' - excellent.
(Bible-speak is hard to write.)

Good stuff!

[sparrow_lately]

Fun fact: it doesn't matter what they're doing, the Winchesters will always be breaking somebody's heart.

Eek! I'm very glad you liked the Bible sections, and the Bible-speak...my justification for Biblical language employed in what would presumably be the mid-21st century is that it's deliberately translated as such by future!scholars in order to match the original scripture in tone and style. But really, I just wanted to write some Bible-speak and quote Revelation.

Enough nerdy rambling, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. :)

[shoofus]

beautiful, bleak and painful and all too possible, every one of them

[sparrow_lately]

Thank you so much. <3

[melitta4ever]

Wow! This was... Heart breaking. I loved how you twisted the stories and still kept them in character.

[sparrow_lately]

Thank you!

[aerynsun5]

These were so very good. I can tell because you squeezed my heart. I loved the variety you were able to give each part. And poor, poor Dean.

[sparrow_lately]

you squeezed my heart I absolutely love that turn of phrase.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for reading!

[auroramama]

Gold-standard pain of the heartbreak variety. Incredibly well done, awe-inspiring, full of little knife-twists. Just... any time you feel like writing something that doesn't reach this level of sheer kidney-stone agony, I'll be extra grateful.

[sparrow_lately]

sheer kidney-stone agony I never meant to induce such ungodly pain levels! :P Seriously, though, thank you so much.

Alright, well, if I ever churn out something fluffy, it'll be dedicated to you, auroramama.

[auroramama]

Thank you! Even if you never do approach fluff, though, you know I'll be reading.

[sparrow_lately]

<3