jumping in my bed (2/?), a larry stylinson fic

[sparrabethx]

Title: jumping in my bed
Pairing: harry/louis
Rating/Warning: pg15
Word Count: ~6400
Summary: harry wears his heart on his sleeve like he's paid for it, and louis has always had trouble committing to anything. they need to work on these things.
A/N: aaah!! finally!! i worked SUPER hard on this chapter, and it took me a lot longer than i had planned, but

Comments

[mowglimoonshado]

Ahhh! The first half of this was gut-wrenchingly sweet and I felt all dreamy and light headed alongside Harry. Except I was kind of freaking out inside because I didn't know if Louis was with Hannah, and since he never committed to anything with Harry I was getting antsy. And then it got serious and sad :( Poor Harry, he's so young and sweet, and you can really see how he is an open book and vulnerable.

But good job on this chapter! I really liked it. I'm curious to see how far into their story you're going to go.

[lightsisee]

okay oh my god hahahahahahahahaha 'Harry thought one of them would probably have died were it not for Liam’s calm words of “oh for God’s sake Niall get down from there please you’re going to break something”.'

[lightsisee]

Louis was also a bit affectionate, or as Niall like to put it, “he fucks you without actually fucking you”
I ACTUALLY CANNOT STOP LAUGHING
okay I'm sorry back to reading I'm going to try not to quote everything I love at you