Comments | sparktober: Fic! "Love Stories" (2/2) NC-17

mylittleredgirl in sparktober

Fic! "Love Stories" (2/2) NC-17

Oct 21, 2012 22:56

Headers and Part I here!

( Part II )

g:smut, c:elizabeth weir, !fanfic, c:john sheppard, g:romance, g:2nd season

Comments 35

peanutbutterer October 22 2012, 07:05:29 UTC

Heeee. I don't know how this fic can leave me so giddy when it was so angsty, but I totally am. And you've rekindled my spark (OMG, pun!) with these two. Great fic, great characterization, great everything, as always.

We should make a bingo card with places people have written J and E having sex. Bear rug in common room during Pegasus Native party? Check! Love it. It seems like something Elizabeth would never do, but the way it ayed out here was totally believable.

georgierae October 22 2012, 12:20:26 UTC

...I'm worried by the fact that I read 'Pegasus Native party' as Pegasus Nativity. That would be so awkward.

mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:48:02 UTC

That would be terribly awkward, except you KNOW that at least 3/4ths of Pegasus rituals are about fertility.

mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:46:29 UTC

Because it's always giddy-making when they act like clueless dorks! <3

We totally need an epic compilation list, maybe in the form of a map so we can see what few areas are still un-sexed and rectify that!

For some reason I buy off-world sex more than Atlantis sex when it's... unexpected, like they're not dating and haven't really had a conversation about it. I think on Atlantis they'd be way too aware of their responsibilities and tend to have less booze available.

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mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:51:49 UTC

John and all his issues! I love him. He just doesn't do feelings, even though they're all over his face.

Nail-painting! I need a Sparktober manicure, just haven't quite figured out how to do it.

georgierae October 22 2012, 12:21:56 UTC

His heart races and his body warms, but the city doesn't fall.

Definitely my favourite line of the whole fic. Angsty, but the hope is there!

♥

mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:54:49 UTC

They can make it work! Somehow! Maybe! IDK!

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mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:55:22 UTC

ILUUUUU!! <3

lullabymoon October 22 2012, 21:04:38 UTC

Eeee, this is utterly lovely, and happy making, despite how angsty it really is. ♥

mylittleredgirl October 27 2012, 20:56:54 UTC

I totally didn't realize I was writing angst fic, I think because jealousy!fic always makes me really giddy. I'm apparently as emotionally clueless as John. :-P