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Oct 12, 2005 21:28

She saw him sitting there. One foot in front of the other, she wanted to approach him. Her feet disobeyed. He saw her and got up to leave. Don’t! she said, louder than she intended. Don’t go, she repeated. She reached out her hand and grabbed his. She looked into his eyes and saw his initial reluctance to see her. She never saw him so clearly ( Read more... )

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katefinn October 13 2005, 02:28:34 UTC
Sheila, girl! Lovely text! I adored it!

Now if you don't mind my asking, who are these people you wrote about? Because you nailed every possible emotion between them in very few words. Really beautiful!

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tsolossilegna October 14 2005, 00:06:31 UTC
What a beautiful saddness you wrote.

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