Snagged from a couple of people on the friends' list. One sentence from my WIPs. Since some of them haven't really gotten much farther than the stuff I've already posted, this'll be small on the sentences
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Aaaaa, those are all so good! I loved the first detective fic, and part two looks absolutely fabulous so far. Also love the reincarnation~! Maybe it's just my fangirly glasses, but it seems like those cursed bracelets are leading up to something..... interesting. ;D
Thank you! I'm afraid, though, that all the fics I posted here are probably not going to be finished at all. If you want to take one and run with it, though, we can totally talk.
No, I kid. I know the muse is a flighty and capricious creatures. I adore "Birdcage." I've been longing for xxxHOLiC/Legal Drug crossover, and this only sharpened my appetite. Can I Will you continue it?
I know you've said you won't continue the reincarnation fic. But I need to tell you - this is the most intrigued I've been in a long, long time. I seriously think you could slide it right into current canon. Or after canon, really. Oh, I want more. Where were you planning on going with it?
If you want to continue "Birdcage" feel free! (I'm sure I'll get three plot bunnies for it if you agree, but I've been plot bunny-less for this fic for well more than a year, so. Feel free.)
...Since I started this well before the current arc, that's kind of an intriguing concept. Dunno how intriguing.
As for where it was going, it was pretty much going to be a slow threesome relationship fic, with Shizuka and Himawari coming to understand the person Kimihiro is, and he in turn tries to be all aloof and withdrawn so that they don't stay with him out of pity, blah blah blah. Angsty relationship fic with commentary by Yuuko and the Mokonas, basically.
Not a porn-ninja, sorry!sparklyfantaMay 27 2010, 03:12:55 UTC
Kimihiro wasn't expecting the fire to flare up the way it did, surging out from under the wok and reaching greedily for the ceiling. He pulled his arms out of the way and quelled the sparks that had caught the sleeves of his apron with a thought. The wok went flying, vegetables and hot oil sailing through the air, and the pan clattering sharply as it hit the wooden floor of the kitchen.
Himawari dodged back from it, her hands raised to her mouth. She bent to pick up the pan and the vegetables with her bare hands. Kimihiro shouted.
"Hino-san! You'll hurt yourself!"
She dropped a stalk of carrot in the same moment. "I'm sorry," she said. "I'm so sorry, Ichihara-san."
"It was an accident, Hino-san--"
"No," she said. "It wasn't. It never is. I thought--I thought I was finally getting it under control--" Her hands shook, and she cradled her burnt fingers in her lap to still them. "I'm so sorry, Ichihara-san. I didn't mean for it to do that."
Kimihiro was struck with the contrast--the way his Himawari had told him of her
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Can't wait for more! <3
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No, I kid. I know the muse is a flighty and capricious creatures. I adore "Birdcage." I've been longing for xxxHOLiC/Legal Drug crossover, and this only sharpened my appetite. Can I Will you continue it?
I know you've said you won't continue the reincarnation fic. But I need to tell you - this is the most intrigued I've been in a long, long time. I seriously think you could slide it right into current canon. Or after canon, really. Oh, I want more. Where were you planning on going with it?
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...Since I started this well before the current arc, that's kind of an intriguing concept. Dunno how intriguing.
As for where it was going, it was pretty much going to be a slow threesome relationship fic, with Shizuka and Himawari coming to understand the person Kimihiro is, and he in turn tries to be all aloof and withdrawn so that they don't stay with him out of pity, blah blah blah. Angsty relationship fic with commentary by Yuuko and the Mokonas, basically.
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There's a little scene with Himawari and Watanuki and fire in the kitchen and everything.
And it's all your fault! *shakes fist*
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Himawari dodged back from it, her hands raised to her mouth. She bent to pick up the pan and the vegetables with her bare hands. Kimihiro shouted.
"Hino-san! You'll hurt yourself!"
She dropped a stalk of carrot in the same moment. "I'm sorry," she said. "I'm so sorry, Ichihara-san."
"It was an accident, Hino-san--"
"No," she said. "It wasn't. It never is. I thought--I thought I was finally getting it under control--" Her hands shook, and she cradled her burnt fingers in her lap to still them. "I'm so sorry, Ichihara-san. I didn't mean for it to do that."
Kimihiro was struck with the contrast--the way his Himawari had told him of her ( ... )
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