When No Words Come

[sparkaperture]

Title: When No Words Come
Author: sparkaperture
Rating: PG-13 for angst and sexual references.
Pairings: Amber/Nicole
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Amber battles with herself when it comes to her own strong feelings for Nicole, struggling to keep her emotions in check for the sake their friendship.

Notes: My first fem fic, and yep, it’s another angst fic. I

Comments

[tsents]

Oh...wow.

This left me speechless. Just the emotion in it, and all the things left unsaid...and I wanted, so, so much for Nic to feel the same way about Amber, but as it was this was so realistic, so beautifully believable, I absolutely wouldn't have it any other way.

Thank you SO, so much for writing this.

[sparkaperture]

Ah, thanks a lot! I was hoping someone would read it. (: ♥

[tsents]

Definitely! Just that I think this comm is a bit low on members right now? ^-^;

This line simply made me melt:

"Wondering if Nicole had any idea how much Amber loved her."

This piece really struck me 'cos I've been in Amber's place before. That whole "want-can't-have" and constantly longing...*sigh*

PS: I just re-read it for the 3rd time. XD

[sparkaperture]

Yeah, I know exactly what you mean. I struggled with this piece for a while because I was somewhat writing it based off of real events and real emotions, so, it's kind of hard to put a bit of yourself into it. (:

[wintersol]

Ah...why is this so good?
Amber/Nicole friendship is amazing!
I like the character of it and it was written so well! I could feel the emotion, which is nice. I kind of wanted a happy ending, but the one is great. Very true to life!
Good job!

[sparkaperture]

Thanks a lot. (:

[yesungswifey]

ARGH YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED!