As for me singing Crowley... That is weird. But, it is very functional in the story so far.
Good stuff. Also, I think you might have missed a "t" to form a "this" earlier on (check your second paragraph)... I mean, the "kid" he's talking to isn't his, isn't it?
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As for me singing Crowley... That is weird. But, it is very functional in the story so far.
Good stuff. Also, I think you might have missed a "t" to form a "this" earlier on (check your second paragraph)... I mean, the "kid" he's talking to isn't his, isn't it?
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Also, thank you for catching the typo, heh.
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