WHAT ME WRITING!? OH HOLY-

Jan 08, 2008 03:19

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dacrons_lair January 9 2008, 03:08:34 UTC
Heh. The man just loves his cookies.

As for me singing Crowley... That is weird. But, it is very functional in the story so far.

Good stuff. Also, I think you might have missed a "t" to form a "this" earlier on (check your second paragraph)... I mean, the "kid" he's talking to isn't his, isn't it?

-M

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sparda219 January 9 2008, 09:38:41 UTC
Indeed, I think it's going to work.

Also, thank you for catching the typo, heh.

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