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lomelinde_sama in spank_palace

It's Not a Toy - ficlet

Mar 04, 2006 21:57

title : It’s Not a Toy
fandom : Blak Cat
characters/pairing : Train, Eve
medium : ficlet
challenge : jewel box
AN : Written in ten minutes. Angst. And somehow I think I managed to wrap the first challenge in it. Bad me.
Crit : W/E

( It's shining. )

lomelinde_sama

Comments 31

clueless_psycho March 4 2006, 23:20:09 UTC

It's shiny. Nicely written ^ ^

lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 07:46:43 UTC

Thanks !

bleedtoblue March 4 2006, 23:32:28 UTC

Two challenges in one...very smooth, nicely crafted.

"Train smiles again. Or pretends to. It’s difficult to say sometimes."

lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 07:47:04 UTC

If the modthingie asks, I didn't do it on purpose, I swear !

Thanks.

pixee_led March 5 2006, 00:02:37 UTC

Is Train the hot guy in the white suit? And Eve... was she the girl he rescued from that evil guy? The one that was using her as a weapon?

*needs to watch more Black Cat*

lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 07:49:09 UTC

Actually, Train is Black Cat. The one in the white suit would be ... Sven, I suppose, the one with the eyepatch, yeah ?

Train's the one with the thigh holster and the black gun Hadès.

pixee_led March 5 2006, 10:14:54 UTC

Got it. I keep thinking of him as Heero. *snrk*
So who is Eve? The kimono girl?

lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 11:01:17 UTC

No, Eve is the little guy that Sven rescued like you guessed. The kimono girl is Saya Minatsuki, Train's best friend. She's dead already at the beginning of the story.

BTW, got any torrent links to download some subbed Black Cat ?

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New Is Shiny Too tokagemusume March 5 2006, 17:33:52 UTC

Ah, Black Cat. I've only seen a sample of it and it looks very interesting...
Nice twinkle piece -- now I wanna know about the gun too! It's got a "mustn't touch" field all around it and so, of course, is officially irresistible! LOL

Re: New Is Shiny Too lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 20:35:59 UTC

Glad you liked !

gogoangelgunboy March 5 2006, 21:40:29 UTC

this moves very smoothly...it's economical with its words and conveys the mood well. i don't know this fandom, but you've managed to reveal some important things about the characters in a very small space. omedetto!

lomelinde_sama March 5 2006, 21:49:15 UTC

Arigatou gozaimashita !

I learnt from the best, I think.

And the fandom is really a plesure to know, you should try. There's thigh holsters, guys with eyepatches and weird powers, and a resident psycho wearing insane clothes and always having a rose handy, and having a bad case of stalking the hero, too.