Love In A Dark Place

[bleedtoblue]

Title: Love In A Dark Place: A Tale of Lust and Addiction.
Author: BleedToBlue
Genre: Original Fiction
Challenge: Mythos
Warning: implied m/f and possible drug use

A/N: Revisionist mythology.

Comments

[pixee_led]

Ohhh, yummy! I hardly ever find het stuff smexy but damn, this was! You captured so much sensuality in so few words - and that wonderful, dangerous submission as well... *rawr*

Oh and:
Internal bleeding never stained the carpet
I love that line. It says so much about loneliness and propriety.
I want more from you!

[bleedtoblue]

Thank you, you're always very kind. Oh, het...should've put up a warning, I don't often/ever write that. I do think sensuality should work across gender lines.

I enjoy your writing a great deal. May I friend your writing journal?

[pixee_led]

Of course you can friend inkfaerie. Would it be okay to friend your lj?

[bleedtoblue]

Thank you! And please, do.

[blehmeh05]

This was hell, she was sure of it and the damned dog was still barking.

I don't know why, but this line really resonates, for me. Intriguing stuff; it made me feel kinda squirmy.

[bleedtoblue]

Squirmy, LOL, I recently told a writer I like very much that their writing made me flinch.

The dog, well, it's part of the story. ^.^

[gogoangelgunboy]

hey, every good gate o' hell has a hound guarding it, neh?

hee - the devil is in the details *grin* including how many pomegranate seeds you take *laughing*

the myth of kore is one of my favourites ever, and you've done a gorgeous job twisting it around...

[bleedtoblue]

*g* You are very kind.

A girl with overbearing parents, the 'bad' boy.....I always thought she knew exactly what she was doing.

w00t!!!!

[tokagemusume]

Waaaaay cool retelling of the myth! I love it! Oh, and her Mum's gonna make us ALL suffer for this girl's lack of character!
This is so sweetly, perfectly done. Thank you thank you thank you.

Re: w00t!!!!

[bleedtoblue]

Thank you, you always embarrass me.