Heart of the Hardest World

Sep 12, 2012 20:33

Title: Heart of the Hardest World
Beta: judith-88-g, cherie-morte
Pairing: Sam/Ruby
Rating: R for language
Word count: ~800
Summary: When Dean ends up in Hell, Ruby spares no effort in keeping Sam alive. She's rewarded with an idea that strikes her on duty: ( a plan for a little payback. )

fic:sam/ruby, fic

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monicawoe September 12 2012, 19:42:57 UTC
Very enjoyable read!

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spangielka September 12 2012, 20:19:44 UTC
I'm so glad it worked for you! Thank you kindly for reading and commenting.

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spangielka September 13 2012, 22:51:13 UTC
But he looks good drenched in water! I'm conflicted.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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quickreaver September 13 2012, 03:44:12 UTC
"He looks utterly exhausted: a little bruised, and layers-dirty where his skin sticks out from that huge, discolored sweatshirt. His tousled hair is a perfect web to catch all the grime along the path of slaughter, proper for a grieving Winchester."

Fabulous passage!

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spangielka September 13 2012, 22:55:20 UTC
I'm glad you think it worked.
Thank you for your kind comment!

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judith_88_g September 14 2012, 08:37:56 UTC
You know what my favorite thing about this little fic is? It's how much you managed to say about Sam in 814 words. I gotta say, it's a mighty neat trick.
I didn't say anything about Ruby before and her deliberate beauty in a trimmed all over flesh-dress deserves its own plate of candies. Hanging the mistletoe? That demonic lady will stop at nothing!

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spangielka September 14 2012, 15:16:20 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed the characterization because, in all fairness, I didn't pay much attention to that. It was more like "hey, a romantic trap of mistletoe! Brought to you by demon! That's sufficiently ridiculous."
But it's also truth that I Know What You Did Last Summer is one of my favorite episodes. There is so much to read into the characters and their interactions, and I like to try.
Thank you so, so much for your help and this kind comment!

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