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[spain_fanatic79]

 Title: Believe
Author: spain_fanatic79
Pairing: Nacho/Fran Rico
Rating: PG
A/N: For missalonso …I wrote it like you suggested it…but I don't think I wrote it very well  :S I’m sorry :(

Ever since their first game together as teammates years ago, Nacho had looked up to Fran Rico. He admired everything about his captain. His captain was a brilliant midfielder.

Comments

[missalonso]

It is okay <3. Don't worry about it :). Give you a little bit longer Feedback when I come from work. Thank you for this :)

[missalonso]

I like the Story. I don't know when Nacho became one of the second Captains. Goni is second Captain too, but I think he is the third Captain after Fran Rico and Nacho [like Marcelo]. Notice to me ask my friend about it.
I like the way which you used to discribe the two players. Reminds me on my situation in the beginning of my fanlife about Real Madrid. I had Xabi and Cristiano. Two different players. Xabi - more Fran Rico and Cristiano - more Nacho {really interesting}

“Why aren’t you even concerned?” Nacho finished, getting a little annoyed at Fran Rico’s perceived nonchalance.
“Because…” Fran Rico patted him on the back of his head. “Because I know you’ll take good care of them.”
I love this part <3
Thank you for this short story <3

[spain_fanatic79]

Aww <3 Thank you for your kind words; I thought this one was bad :(

I think I will write another Fran Rico/Nacho one...but I think it will be dirty...if you do not mind ;)

[missalonso]

I have the feeling I need a new Icon ^.^. Hmmmm, but it is a very interesting idea. Making an Icon with the two boys, my second RM Castilla Pairing :D. Behind Morata/ Sarabia.
A dirty story with the two boys...this sounds interesting. Reminds me on different stories with Ramos/ Casillas {Captain/ Second Captain}

Please write it when you have time for it <3