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[spades_fire]

My writing style is so WEIRD right now! It's like I can't figure out how to write normal ACTIONS without turning it into something introspective and flowery. Which I guess isn't a BAD thing, it's just... making it a little hard when I'm not trying to get flowery or introspective. I want someone walking from point a to point b, damnit, that's all!

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[anonymous]

Unfazed is the state of mind, unphased is a scientific term, I believe.

Pretty passage, though. I could see how that could get annoying if it wasn't what you wanted. Good luck with it anyway!

[spades_fire]

Hah, I'll just have to deal with the annoying, if it's correct and all. Sigh. :)

And thanks, both for the compliment and the luck (I'll need it)! This is one of the least annoying sections, even... so I really don't know what's up. asjdaksrhnajslg