Personal Statement for college applications

[spacekiss]

Please, PLEASE tell me what you think. It's still pretty rough (I just finished it a second ago), but I want to know what you think!! It's important. :S

Dear DiaryI had this little notebook. It was flawlessly bound, its color inviting, and the leather cover was just barely wrinkled, as if it had already seen its share of words. Its pages were

Comments

[xviewtifuljoex]

Not being a writer it's sort of hard to say that could be better...cause frankly, i think its fabulous. I suppose if i were to change anything i would maybe change the title.

Not that "Dear Diary" doesn't fit or work, just come up with a few more...and if Dear Diary is the best, then keep it.

That's what I do whenever songwriting, i come up with a few parts, all in the same key, and then i pick the best one :)

but fantastic job juliya :D

[spacekiss]

Aww, thank you :))

Yeah, I'm still trying to think of a decent title... I don't even know if I'll use this, lol. It's too.. plain? idk :/