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[FIC] A Soft Reboot

Aug 28, 2011 23:51

Title: A Soft Reboot (5/?)
Fandom: Hetalia
Rating: PG (Subject to change)
Warnings: Swear words
Summary: Once every couple centuries, the nations inexplicably disappear and are reborn as humans. But the memories and nationhood gradually return and they have funny ways of getting back to each other.

( Danny Bell lives in one of those towns where the local paper is only a few pages long, purely due to a lack of things happening )

hetalia, fic

Comments 5

songofbreaking August 29 2011, 14:56:03 UTC

can I just say I love you? or rather, your story? the idea is inventive and your execution is flawless. I can picture everything perfectly and I love your twists on the characters.

it seems as if you have everything planned out which I really, really like because so many authors post stories with little to no idea where it is going. the way you explained why the renewal had to happen in chapter 2 was perfect. it could have been vague and confusing and you could have really mangled it but you kept it simple and clear.

they're coming together (or at least some of them are) and I can't wait until they meet each other for the first time. please continue soon!

space_butt August 29 2011, 19:03:23 UTC

Ahhhh thank you so much! That's so kind of you. <3 Sometimes I worry that I'm purple prosing all over the place, so it's great to hear that you can imagine the scenes clearly!

Welllll, to be absolutely honest, I can't really take praise for the planning. OTL I was kind of just winging it until two chapters ago, but if I want this to become a good story, then planning is vital, especially if I'm going to keep jumping around the timeline like this. :p

Thank you for your lovely comment. Confrontation scenes coming up soon!

koosei August 29 2011, 15:35:15 UTC

space_butt August 29 2011, 19:09:26 UTC

Thank you!! :D Haha of course they were going to be twins. :p I have no idea whether the 'born in America'/'born in Canada' is plausible (I spent a bunch of time looking at google earth, trying to find a hospital in Canada near the border and it was hard!)

Thank you for commenting ~ <3

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space_butt August 30 2011, 09:49:21 UTC

Oh goodness, thank you so much! I'm surprised there aren't more reincarnation!fics around to be honest (which is a shame because I lovvee reincarnation fics), so I thought I'd exploit that niche in the fic market. :p

I'm working on it as we speak. :) Thank you for the comment!