foolish haikus

[sp8cemonkee]

See the monkey wait
Let the moment pass on by
The monkey waits for me

I can't believe I have access to LJ at work again.

Comments

[weasel_1313]

the fools

[xkookykrysx]

;)

[bull_monkey]

not a true haiku.

line 3 has 6 syllables.
you are a disappointment to the haiku lovin' monkey race.

[sp8cemonkee]

Let- 1
the - 1
moment - 2
pass - 1
on - 1
by - 1

that would be 7 syllables.

you are a disappointment to the educated world.

[bull_monkey]

funny, that's what I say about your mom.