*like John, CrystalHeaven would like to be able to form coherent enough sentences to express how much she loved this fic, but her brain seems to have over loaded and well, all you're likely to get out of her now is a lot of gibberish, followed by some mutteirng, and probably a little drool*
Thank you. Poor Rodney, he really was hurting and I'm glad that came through. Sometimes John can be a scaredy-cat poopy-head, but he really does know how to make up for it. :)
I dunno why exaclty but this moved me... John turned away to enter the tent he was sharing with Ronon and Teyla. His teammates quickly fell asleep, but John lay awake in his sleeping bag, their quiet breathing sounding strange to his ears. He was used to a wheezing snore. It was a long while before he fell asleep.
*scowls at you* You made me cry! *considers* But there was smut at the end and everyone was happy, so I'll let you off the hook this time. *bg*
I hated John pulling away from Rodney and the distance just growing. Loved Ronon and Teyla both figuring out what John needed before he did. Ronon telling him to just go for it was perfect, and his whatever shrug later on, and Teyla with the foreheads touching after John told her...sweet. And yay! for John finally seeing the light and Rodney taking a night off. *g*
Yay, I made you cry! LOL This was my big attempt at angst, and since I don't feel I write angst very well (all the schmoop seems to get in the way), I'm glad that at least somebody cried. *g*
I'm glad you liked the Ronon and Teyla bits. I think that both of them have far more insight than the Earthlings give them credit.
Yeah, Rodney's a saint! LOL John does love to live in the land of denial, though. Fortunately, the power of the McKay wears down his resistance, which was futile anyway. *g*
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I dunno why exaclty but this moved me...
John turned away to enter the tent he was sharing with Ronon and Teyla. His teammates quickly fell asleep, but John lay awake in his sleeping bag, their quiet breathing sounding strange to his ears. He was used to a wheezing snore. It was a long while before he fell asleep.
Beautiful.
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I hated John pulling away from Rodney and the distance just growing. Loved Ronon and Teyla both figuring out what John needed before he did. Ronon telling him to just go for it was perfect, and his whatever shrug later on, and Teyla with the foreheads touching after John told her...sweet. And yay! for John finally seeing the light and Rodney taking a night off. *g*
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I'm glad you liked the Ronon and Teyla bits. I think that both of them have far more insight than the Earthlings give them credit.
So glad you liked. :)
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Honestly, John can be so slow on the uptake sometimes. Rodney's a saint for putting up with him. *g*
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Glad you liked.
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