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soypasajera

From the Damage: Lucas/Peyton Oneshot

May 28, 2008 23:47

If you know me then you're probably shocked by this. I have written a another LP based oneshot, this is more Lucas based, I go into his head (really scary place) and make a few twerks and this is what I get for the finale haha. Oh and the song is From the Damage by O-Town. Here is a vid of them performing if you'd like to hear :P

FROM THE DAMAGE

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jasambeliever May 29 2008, 10:58:46 UTC

Omg, it was so perfect! *sigh* Kinda made me tear up and everything! You did an awesome job of getting into his head! The song is absolutely fitting! =)

soypasajera May 30 2008, 03:05:19 UTC

aww! thanks! Hee I fell in love with that song all over again

babybirdd May 29 2008, 13:38:19 UTC

Look at what those boy bands make you do:P
This was great, Ness... if only we could actually see more of Lucas in this light *sigh*. I loved it.

Write more!:P

soypasajera May 30 2008, 03:06:37 UTC

LOL yeah I blame it all on boybands. I know we never know what Lucas thinks, just his reactions. Thanks Avz! I'm actually thinking of doing a 2nd part to it, whenever I find inspiration. Love the icon...CHem ftw!

moni828 May 29 2008, 16:59:36 UTC

I used to love O-town so much! Hee, and that song is awesome!

On to the one-shot... that was amazing, Nessa. I loved everything about it, especially when he said that he won't let the comet come back to him he was going after him. Awww! If only he thought of that for real, huh? LOL. The ending was great 'cause you want to keep reading. Awesome job.

soypasajera May 30 2008, 03:09:20 UTC

Isn't it? I hadn't heard it in a while and then I listened to the words and I was like LUCAS!

Its my dream to have him go after her! He hasn't done it and I want him to. Not saying anything but maybe a part 2 at some point *looks*

moni828 May 30 2008, 03:11:07 UTC

Really? [smile] I hope that there is. ;)

leslie_marie199 May 29 2008, 18:27:21 UTC

*thud* That was amazing !! You did a really good job of getting into his head , if only Mark would follow your lead =P I really dont even know what to say except that it was just perfect, I didnt want it to end !

soypasajera May 30 2008, 03:12:21 UTC

I wish I could get into his head, I'd understand him so much more. Yeah the ending is kinda open! leaves it for a part 2 maybe..........very maybe right now lol

brite_city May 29 2008, 19:16:27 UTC

Ah, this was so pretty! It makes me not hate Lucas so much lol. I loved this line
It’s funny how I told Peyton I hated her in a way because I hate myself for putting her in that position.
I think that's so true because he could never really hate her and he's the one that screwed up.

soypasajera May 30 2008, 03:20:24 UTC

Thanks. I started not hating Lucas towards the end of this season, its why I decided to write this because he's not a complete idiot lol. And I do believe, I believe he resents himself as much as he does her but he can never really hate her. Its not like Lucas to hate her and its the only thing that was a constant this season bc even though he said it the minute he saw her he took it back.