FEEL THIS: Lucas/Peyton Oneshot

May 22, 2008 15:11

Haha how long did it take me to write LP...last time I did this was after 512. Still don't like my writing when it comes to LP lol but here it is. Heh...my take on LP when we find out he called Peyton because I refuse to believe otherwise. ;)

Feel This

To all those lost souls who have forgotten to believe in the immensity of love.

He had never ( Read more... )

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loquitaqbanita May 22 2008, 23:20:02 UTC
Even though I'm not an LP fan I do like you writing so I read it anyway. As usual it didn't disappoint. A part of me just doesn't think he is calling Peyton because then there goes that storyline if they get married. And God knows Mark has been dragging it out for five seasons.

BTW, I like your new layout.

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soypasajera May 22 2008, 23:34:52 UTC
aww thanks...yeah for my couple it would be too good to be true but I just don't see Lucas proposing to anyone else either. lol

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rafaboreanaz May 22 2008, 23:22:28 UTC
Oh my.. I loved the ending.
Great job Nessa! :D

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soypasajera May 22 2008, 23:35:32 UTC
thank you! I love the ending too...I was looking like crazy for that comet quote :D

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moni828 May 22 2008, 23:52:10 UTC
Aww... I really needed something like this to read. I totally loved and adored it. And that ending... oh I just might hug you right now. If you were here with me, though. Hahah What the hell? [hug]

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soypasajera May 23 2008, 01:23:56 UTC
Aww thanks! I
I'll hug you back *hug*

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othloverr_0322 May 22 2008, 23:53:01 UTC
see this , this is how it should be.
urgh mark got me so pissed off.
but you just fixed it:)
thanks:)
LOOOOOOOOVE IT!:)

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soypasajera May 23 2008, 01:25:04 UTC
aww thank you. Mark has been pissing me off all season. Thanks again!!

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leslie_marie199 May 23 2008, 02:04:28 UTC
OMG! I LOVEEEED it!!!

I love that you had Naley/Brooke/Skills/Junk and Fergie come, that made me smile :) And Lucas's line , "your already my beautiful bride" I can totally just picture him saying that , and I can definatly picture her face after he said it .

The last paragraph was just... *thud*

I personally love the way you write LP, GREAT job !!!!!!

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soypasajera May 23 2008, 02:47:56 UTC
hee I was thinking of the 'you look nice' line haha

thanks Les! glad you liked it!!!!

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