EDC Miniseries: Parte 3- Inalcanzable

[soypasajera]

Te me has vuelto inalcanzable

Ella lo amaba pero era un amor imposible. No veía ninguna forma de estar juntos, especialmente porque el estaba enamorada de otra. Se lo había dicho en confianza y aunque por dentro ella se estaba muriendo no dijo nada. Lo amaba tanto que sólo le importaba su felicidad y si estando con otra era feliz entonces quien

Comments

[jasambeliever]

Wow, that was flawless! My favorite so far! *sigh* I knew from the beginning he meant her, but when I read it, I almost died. It was so cute! About AyC, that definitely puts a new spin on that relationship. lol But omg, this was perfect! I'm even more in love w/ that scene now than I ever was before, and who knew that was even possible.

[soypasajera]

haha yeah no offense to AyC fans, just needed a storyline lol and thanks, I didn't think it was flawless but glad you thought so and yeah impossible to love that scene more but me traumo more writing these things lol

[loquitaqbanita]

I am ashamed to say that tears came to my eyes towards the end of the chapter. I am not a sappy, romantic girl. Actually I'm the completely opposite and I don't cry but it was so beautiful that I found my eyes watery.

I love that scene in the novela. It was so cute and to put it into a story about them and mix the soap with their real life so well was bloody perfect. This is my favorite of the three. I love the song to begin with but the story was so great. You incorporated their real life and acting life so well together. And this line, ahí sólo esas estrellas tan distantes fueron testigos de ese amor que ardía como fuego is the most perfect ending I've seen in a while. :)

[soypasajera]

thanks! really glad you liked! and yeah i felt i had to incorporate the song there :D really glad you liked that line bc it was my favorite!

[moni828]

Wow, that was truly amzingly beautiful! Haa, like my description. LOL. It IS true, though. I loved it!

[soypasajera]

aww thanks haha this was the longest it took me to do one i had to feel it in the song, but luckily DyC performing togetehr inspired me :D