Wolves: 4, part 3

[sowehide]

by Mashiro
beta: Allys777
Naruto fandom, short series, no spoilers
BOYS LOVE: Naruto x Sasuke; drinking, raging hormones, sex
DISCLAIMER: I don’t own Naruto, I am just a fan. This is a FAN FICTION.

chapter 4: part 3

-

“I’m not taking off anything else,” he said as if he’d seen disappointment in Naruto’s eyes.

“Alright,” Naruto shrugged and looked back to

Comments

Awesome!

[blislife]

The virgin-sex was believable lol and hot. They were both very IC. Great job, I can't wait to see what else you will write. I'm glad to have stumbled upon this. ^_^

Re: Awesome!

[sowehide]

Hi! :D

I'm so happy that you have enjoyed the story! Virgin-sex... I'm just so in love with virgin-sex! XD There is just something so adorable and hot about virgin-sex. Maybe I'm an odd guy, but... yeah. I want to read more stories with virgin-sex! XD (...Okay, I'm stopping now. ^-^)

It makes me even happier to hear that you think they are IC. That's important to me. IC and realism. Err... At least my kind of realism. XD

Well, unfortunately I don't have any new fan fiction planned, for now at least. There is what is written already and... that's that. :| Have you read Almost Sucks? It's different from Wolves, I suppose, being AU and not as much humor (there is humor, but in Wolves it's like... lots of humor. ^-^), but it's a good story and it's long, might keep you busy for a while. People tell me it's IC too, even though it's AU. ^-^

Anyway! :D Thank you for reading and for commenting. Wolves was absolutely hilarious to write, so I'm very happy that you enjoyed it too. ^-^ Take care and have fun! :D

*huggles*
Mashiro

[anonymous]

could naruto have been any more selfish a lover? He was disgusted by putting his fingers in someone's ass; but didn't mind puttng his dick in it? And then after getting off twice to Sasuke's zero_all Naruto offered was his hand? He should have let Sasuke fuck hs mouth. That would have been more fair. I enjoyed Sasuke's saying that was the worst 1/2 second of his life. It was a good story. Thanks for sharing it.

[sowehide]

Haha! I agree with you, of course. He was quite selfish. ^-^ In his defense though, he is a teenager and generally confused and messed up by hormones and it was his (their!) first time, and he is honest! I don't quite get the whole fingers=eww, dick=okay, but at least he was honest about it. Oral sex would have been way too early for him (even if it would have been more fair), he would have gone even more eww about that. XD But I do believe that this whole bush experience was way more doing than thinking; both their brains got completely overridden by the inside of their pants. ^-^ But... first times are first times and that comes with trouble. ^-^ And... next time it's Sasuke's turn. XD

I'm happy you liked the story, despite Naruto's shortcomings as a lover. ^-^ Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

*huggles*
Mashiro