I'm not sure what else to write as a comment XD This was well done, I liked your choice of words and your style - this really tugged on my heartsrings XD
I agree, it's a very good story. Sad, but very good. i wish there could be more, like confrontation bewteen nino and ohno about the girlfriend and a revealing of ture feelings.... who knows, but I like this one.(^_^)
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I'm not sure what else to write as a comment XD This was well done, I liked your choice of words and your style - this really tugged on my heartsrings XD
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So beautifully-written, too *_______*
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