I ALREADY MENTIONED THAT I LOVE THIS, BUT OH MAN, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
Can you just imagine Red and Green going to buy Green a new suit? The amount of torture Red would put Green through is hilarious and awful. XD
It's a hilarious and awesome first stab at smut. There are mistakes here and there, but since this was written quickly, I don't know if you want concrit or not. I'll just tell you that YOU'RE AWESOME and THANK YOU for filling this; I thought I would never see a fill, especially one as hilarious and endearing as this one!
(And see, your Red and my Red are a little different so we are not actually the same person, we are still unique snowflakes /sob)
Red is going to have to buy Green several new suits. They'll like, go in a tailor shop and ruin all of them and Green is going to be totally embarrassed and Red just smug and Green's like NOW I'M NEVER GOING TO BE ABLE TO COME HERE AGAIN. Because Green cares about things like dignity, the silly boy.
You can concrit if you want. I like hearing them at least. :3 Though I'm pretty sure I've learned that smut is never supposed to be funny if it's meant to be hot. I'm pretty sure those things are mutually exclusive. >_> Not that I'm ever writing smut ever again.
They are! But I think our Greens are so similar that they might as well be the same person hahahaha
HAHAHAHAHA OMG after reading this i found out how sexy licking lips can be xD Red's attitude you described matched perfectly to what i thought of him in my mind. Thanks for the entertaining read :D loved it
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Can you just imagine Red and Green going to buy Green a new suit? The amount of torture Red would put Green through is hilarious and awful. XD
It's a hilarious and awesome first stab at smut. There are mistakes here and there, but since this was written quickly, I don't know if you want concrit or not. I'll just tell you that YOU'RE AWESOME and THANK YOU for filling this; I thought I would never see a fill, especially one as hilarious and endearing as this one!
(And see, your Red and my Red are a little different so we are not actually the same person, we are still unique snowflakes /sob)
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You can concrit if you want. I like hearing them at least. :3 Though I'm pretty sure I've learned that smut is never supposed to be funny if it's meant to be hot. I'm pretty sure those things are mutually exclusive. >_> Not that I'm ever writing smut ever again.
They are! But I think our Greens are so similar that they might as well be the same person hahahaha
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No, smut can be funny and hot at the same time. It is just incredibly hard and if you can pull it off spectacularly, you're a real master.
Pfft, if we ever do a fic trade again I know what I'm asking for >D!
/s-sob
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