115. Let Me Introduce You With A Monologue.

[sour_plums]

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Summary: a monologue of things that are really no good for you, like love and drugs.
Inspiration: Honestly, I was sitting on the toilet seat, like a lady, peeing, like a lady, when I was thinking, like I usually do, about just a bunch of things, and I thought "I really had to be crazy to be with him, since he was always high ". And I just

Comments

[anonymous]

"I read this. I like this. I like your ass."
It actually made me pretty damn sad. :/

[anonymous]

Sounds like you are the stronger of the two. It's nice to see that you are trying to view the situation from a different minds eye. We can't always understand the reasoning of others. Sometimes shit just hits the fan and you have to just deal with it. I know you're over him, deep down you want to be, you just haven't found anyone else yet, so his taste still lingers. You'll recover and burn that bridge.

[sour_plums]

Haha, that was such a great comment, but I have to clarify. This is actually [for once] fiction. It was kind of inspired by my own personal situation, but I don't do drugs.

In real life, it's HIM that does drugs, and I'm the one who has to be crazy in order to keep up with him. In this one, it's the female character who has to do drugs in order to keep up with the crazy male character.

Thanks :)

[anonymous]

This is great. Your writing is so much more personal than mine is, and in a way, the weakness is mine.

[alienemerald]

I was cracking up at your introduction. Like a lady, yes, but this story was not ladylike at all! Not that it's a bad thing ;)
I love your humor, and I loved reading this. Good luck at the flame this week!

[sour_plums]

Haha thanks :) I like this comment.

[kithlyara]

I, for one, like the amount of times you used "you know" and "I dunno" because it made this piece seem so real in spite of the fiction. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck this week!