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[soulofastar]

Okay here is the sequel to “You are not a soldier”

Found here:

http://soulofastar.livejournal.com/669.html

Dedicated to all who reviewed my first story, not naming names for fear of missing someone out. Though would like to thank Hornblower and Shockd for helping me figure out LJ.

Don’t own. Wish I did but don’t.

Sam’s POV on the final battle and

Comments

[lemonflav_lopfe]

Dare I say, but this is even better than Bee's part, for me. You've nailed a terrified but determined Sam, like, awesomely. ^_________^

About the end, it didn't seem so sudden for me. Cutting of thoughts in writing is really hard, and peoples own thought patterns rarely taper off quietly into a soft hollywood-glossed end. You've stayed honest to character, and Sam was in a state where his thoughts would run as you've written them.

Well done!

Oh I could hug you!

[soulofastar]

*blushs* Thank you so much.
OMG that was my one fear about the thoughts ending so thanks very much for the reassurence!

[h_m_hornblower]

Very lovely. Nice companion to "You are not a soldier."

It is very nicely written and flows well. Seems like natural thought to me is very emotional. I can feel that Sam feels special because of Bee and truthfully only Bee. I also really like how you described Sam's earlier actions with Sector Seven and the other events.

Thank you for also kicking the silly oh-we-may-die-but-I-love-you scene during the big battle, that really sucked in the middle of the whole battle, we paused so Mikaela could say that she was glad she got in the car. It kills me.
Loved it, More please!

*covers mouth* (will not unlease plot-bunny on nice author, will not unlease plot-bunny on nice author, will not unlease plot-bunny on nice author, will not unlease plot-bunny about Bee being not JUST a guardian like Sam isn't a soldier, nope, will not unlease plot-bunny on nice author) Ignore me - . -

[soulofastar]

Thanks very much*beaming!*(or should that be Beeming?)

I hated that part of the movie, I mean does she not have enough faith in him to believe that he'll win and come back alive? Bee believed he would come back so why can't she?

Ohhhhhhhhh a plot bunny!
I might end up doing that after my other fic. Maybe an outsiders view of SamXBee relationship? a autobot and a deceptacon?
Oh God your bunny has multiplied already!
I wasn't even considering doing any more, lol guess I am now!
Yeah!