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souleswanderer

The Cure (1/2)

Jun 30, 2008 21:52

Title: The Cure part 1
Characters : Nine, Rose, Jack, Jackie
Rating: pg
Disclaimer: not mine, too broke to own
Summary: Prompt #32 - Doctor Who - The Doctor encounters some alien sex pollen. Rose and Jack cure him - without sex.
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Comments 6

kynaii July 1 2008, 06:03:05 UTC

I'm glad to see you wrestled this into submission. Looks promising!

souleswanderer July 1 2008, 14:45:24 UTC

Well, so far the second part has gotten the better of me...

Thanks :)

dameruth July 1 2008, 07:30:54 UTC

I still think it's a great idea for an anaphrodisiac. :D

souleswanderer July 1 2008, 14:46:41 UTC

hehe, I'm still giggling over the material I got from you. Sorry I didn't come up with a way to incorporate it...maybe I should throw it in a different universe.

wiggiemomsi July 5 2008, 02:17:52 UTC

"Doctor Who - The Doctor encounters some alien sex pollen. Rose and Jack cure him - without sex."

Now, I'm not too sure about this. Personally, I think there SHOULD be sex ... lots and lots of sex!

Intriguing idea; great start and tense build up (aren't Jack & Rose sweet together?) Now, is Jack going to start showing symptoms before the Doctor is well? Run, Rose; run!

Looking forward to the next part.

*Hugs*

souleswanderer July 5 2008, 11:27:38 UTC

Well, the whole challenge was based on the idea of 'no sex' in the story, which made it intriguing and also much easier to write.

It was coming up with a cure that proved the most difficult, since I try to think outside of the box.

And thanks for the slap upside the head...I notice I still didn't get the right point across with Jack...it wasn't so much him getting infected, but when the Doctor would see him as part of the solution. My bad, I really need to work on being able to see things from a different perspective.

Thanks for reviewing!