you have love gums and a love tongue and love thumbs

Apr 20, 2010 17:46

i would like to write you a list, going from insides to outsides ( Read more... )

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fabricant_abjd April 21 2010, 20:29:25 UTC
hey... i love your poem.
actually.

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souledoutt April 22 2010, 00:52:16 UTC
hey, i love you. actually ♥

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hellodeer April 21 2010, 22:24:33 UTC
I love everything you write. When I finished reading this, I said "this girl is a genius", because, well, this poem. Your poems. Your letters. Your fanfictions. Everything you write is like magic, really. I feel so happy and warm reading your stuff. <3

i would like to write you a list, going from insides to outsides.
I found this so cute lol

your think-pink brain disconnects my cerebellum and now
i am falling apart,
thoughts skipping stones into great clumsy deaf ears.
<3

so what's it gonna be, aorta crybaby?
So cute and funny. I smiled a wide happy smile when I read it.

and your arteries are not art or... teries,
they're highways
i get stuck in
Awww. That was really special, like, you're like his blood or something, idk.

until the lines in your palms read "her, she, need, me"
until the balls of your feet put pressure on you to walk in every direction but away
and all your ligaments are screaming, "tear me
so she can nurse you back to health with her hands
that happen to fit into yours so perfectly."


you have love gums and a ( ... )

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souledoutt April 22 2010, 00:54:32 UTC
gahhhh thank you thank you thank you so much! your comments are always so perfect, seriously. i write for feedback/love like this.

you make me feel like a princess! ♥ ♥ ♥ everywhere <3

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cocomouse April 26 2010, 16:36:23 UTC
i'm just lurking nbd, but after reading this i just want to kiss you omg it is so wonderful

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souledoutt April 30 2010, 03:17:21 UTC
-kiss kiss kiss- thank youuu <3

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