[Fic] Show Me (1/2)

[souleater_angel]

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[pinkporca]

I like this...so far it is sad. Poor Jin he was about to say the majic three words too. Thank you.

[souleater_angel]

Yes poor Jin getting cut off like that :/
More coming soon. Thank you for commenting. :]

[xiochermm3]

i loveit more, more please <3

[souleater_angel]

More coming soon. Thank you for commenting ^_^

[aterjsa]

T________T

update soon...

and i kinda want kame to break up with jin...maybe just to give jin a breathing space since kame can't risk having anyone find out maybe it'll help him think things thru if he wants to risk everything for jin and for jin to be saved from all the hurt...

well, maybe not a break up but a cool off...

i'm kinda looking for angst these days...hahaha

update soon!

[souleater_angel]

yes they are both in a lose/lose situation it seems. Either way, they'll both be hurt.
haha hope this helped fill your need for angst. I'm really not very good at it yet so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Will try to update soon. Thank you for commenting! :]

[the_fey_girl11]

i love it ~ the emotions seem so raw and real.

will be waiting for the update! thnx!

[souleater_angel]

so glad you like it. I will try to update really soon^^

[sanzuya]

Oh my god my heart is breaking T.T
The feelings are so strong. I feel for both of Jin and Kazuya here. Just about to say the magical words and then being pushed away, so harsh! But I can understand Kazuya's reasons too. Which one should I side? T_T Can't decide xD It's really hard situation but I hope everything turns out happily!
Thank you! <3 :)

[souleater_angel]

I can't side with one over the other either. ^_^
Sorry for making your heart break! :/ Will try to fix it soon.
Thank you so much for the lovely comment!