sublimation iii: the wanting comes in waves

[souleater411]

            Jittery and alert, she was doing surprisingly well for someone with such intricate dreams this morning. Walking into her first class of the day, Literature, she found her friend sitting in the sit next to her own already, staring at her with one eyebrow raised. She crossed her legs and fiddled with her hair, absently greeting her friend

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[kirishimaayama]

/Kiri intrudes

I only had time to glance at this since it's one of the first things in my inbox, but my mind is as confused as heck. Anyway:

" in the sit next to" <- seat ^^

And 'absently' sounded a little repetitive between para 1 and 2. ^^;

/Kiri intrusion out
/slumps and goes to sleep in the corner. T.T

[souleater411]

Thank you, thank you for this. Because I fail, and life, and ;A;. YOU'RE FRIGGING AWESOME. :D

Still not getting sleep, girly? Tsk tsk. :/