Drabble Fest entries

Aug 18, 2008 08:37



The first 10 comments refer to the first drabble.

Lanolin

Surprised, huh? Yep, my hands're soft fer once,
from that stuff in the wool. What makes 'em waterproof.
Why I left my gloves off today. Yer reward for stickin this out, Jack.
You got anywhere on ya this smooth?
Naw, that don't count. It ain't skin.
But these, maybe soft as my fingertip? Hmm, bit chapped.
How 'bout this patch down here, where the hair's rubbed off. Yeah.
Now these, too much hair.
But this... smooooth as my palm. Yeeaahh...

Jack! Did you hear me? I said would you bring the hand lotion from the medicine cabinet.
If you ever decide to come outta there, that is...

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Three Postcards

6/22/83
Real sorry about August. But I got the cabin for November.

Ennis Del Mar

9/10/83
You get my card about November 7th? Might be able to make it in early October.

Ennis

10/4/83
Meet you in a month?

E

PS Thinking of getting a phone.

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Boys Should Watch Football

Think if I went out for football I'd wanna play center.

Bobby, if you don't eat your dinner I'm gonna have to turn off that television.

Why, Mama? I'm gonna be eatin' this food for the next two weeks.

Turkey soup, turkey sandwiches, turkey hash... Why don't we ever have fish, anyway?

You heard your mama. You can eat your dinner. Then you can watch the game.

I'm not interested in the game. There's only a minute left. I'm waiting for the locker room interviews.

Daddy? Daddy!

Yesss! Thanks for once, ole grumpy.

Hell, we don't eat with our eyes.

Sometimes it's the next best thing.

You want your son to grow up to be a man, don't you daughter? Boys should watch football.

From the sidelines is fine with me. Maybe someday they'll let boys be cheerleaders.

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Meat

I ain't done this before, whatever he might think.  I started it, but he just took over. Sure seems ta take to it naturally. One quick shot was all he needed. When his gun went off, swear I could taste it, was so hungry. Now the next step is up to me. This won't be easy, with him expectin me to lead the way. I only ever watched other guys do it before, never got a chance to try it myself till now.

Jack, what in hell are ya waitin for? Thought ya said you knew how ta butcher game!

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3 Postcards Ennis never finished

Jack

Married Alma yesterday.
It's fine but nothin like

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Jack

Got work layin asfalt. Guy
there talks all day but he aint
like you. Hope your riding
good & not

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Jack

I'm a father today got a
little girl. When I hold her
wonder how I could of hit you.
Never should of let

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 To Have and Have Not
100 words

Four weeks had never passed so slowly. Yet for the first time ever he dreaded their meeting, wondering how he'd greet him. But first contact was normal, though his smile was not so bright. By the fire, Jack held out a Kennedy half-dollar, flat on his palm, the one he always carried with him. Because of the year, he'd explained once. Then he closed both fists, waved and churned them. Pick, he said, but that hand was empty and so was the other. Bobby was learning magic and showed him. He'd practiced for a month. The coin never reappeared.
 

drabble, soulan

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