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soucieux

[notes] tl;dr on Yakuza AU

Jan 30, 2008 13:52

The tl;dr Notes on Yakuza AU [Akame ( Read more... )

Comments 14

diac January 30 2008, 19:29:47 UTC

I love all these fics...like LOVE A LOT! And I finished your comments and I got it all just as you tried to express it -so you ROCK XDDDD and I want more so much! THANK YOU! CONGRATS! PLEASE CONTINUE <3333333333333

matchynishi January 31 2008, 02:30:41 UTC

That clarified things a lot! Kame, lol, such an oblivious jerk in denial. XD BUT HAPPY ENDING FTW. Also, wow, you're gonna write more of this... *_*

soucieux January 31 2008, 02:32:30 UTC

MORE. MAYBE. ONE DAY. I mean I could and I might, but dsfsafjlas. D: MAYBE I'LL LEAVE THE FICWRITING TO OTHERS FOR A WHILE BC I'D LIKE TO READ, TOO.

..hint.

matchynishi January 31 2008, 02:38:15 UTC

True. It's really awesome of you to finish this. :D

lasklj.

lelola January 31 2008, 04:57:02 UTC

Thank you for the ride.

snowy_yuki January 31 2008, 08:12:54 UTC

WHOA!!!!

kateriya January 31 2008, 14:47:39 UTC

I love your notes =)

I read everything in the order you posted, and did all that "OMG NEXT FIC NOW PLEASE"-- internally, that is, because I am a failure at giving comments that are more than "OMG" 99% of the time - and I love your fluency. I loved that Jin isn't playing Kame, that he was just sick of Kame being a self-centered dick. It makes Jin real, makes the different aspirations they both had at one point there, but not in-your-face. It makes Jin intelligent (a 3-dimensional Jin is always worth bonus points in my book), but at the same time the way he tried to probe Kame into admitting has this shade of childishness that makes me want to pet him and swat Kame for being obtuse ( ... )

soucieux January 31 2008, 22:10:06 UTC

Thank you so so so so so much for this comment. I'm awed to be praised for fluency because when I write (and backspace and delete and start all over), I find it so difficult to keep a sense of...sense. That is, I'm not really sure if what I'm writing makes sense to everyone else and. Fdfsda. Thank you. ♥

...dasfasdfa. This comment was so nice. I. GUH. THANK YOU.

kateriya February 2 2008, 03:50:29 UTC

=) I tend to view backspace and delete as manifestations of perfectionist tendencies.

And now I'll stop pretending to be coherent. adgkfhfdkjg MORE PLEASE!

soucieux February 2 2008, 04:02:12 UTC

i'm working on something new! 8D but i will probably come back to this. someday. SOON. maybe. i don't know!