Jin writes lyrics because he wants to, because he can. He's not concerned with quality, not concerned with what others think, because this is what he thinks. This is what is going through his mind and this is what he wants to show. He doesn't know if everyone will understand, doesn't know if he can covey everything properly, but in that case, he decides, he can just explain it to them
( ... )
It is raining cats and dogs, there's a crocodile climbing out from the toilet, there's a dumb bat that keeps trying to fly through the glass of the window pane...
And Akame are on the run.
Or you know, that girl!Kame snippet of yours could do some expanding on too :D
"Jin, we have to go," Kame says, tugs on the other's sleeve. "Jin, I mean it. We have to leave. Right now."
"Kame. What did I do?"
"Jin, I don't know, but we have to go."
"Kame, I did this."
"Jin, I--"
"Kame, are you looking at this?" Jin pulls himself out of Kame's grip. "Why are you here?" He looks at the other incredulously. "Do you see me? Do you see this? Do you see--"
"Jin, you didn't mean it. Let's go," Kame pleads, grabs his arm again. "They're going to come, Jin. And we can't afford--"
"Kame," Jin says very seriously. "Kame, I just killed a man. I just blew his head off, spattered the walls and floor with blood, and--"
"Jin"Kame, I don't even remember it." He chokes, turns away reaches for a trashcan, smears blood on the bottom of his trainers in the process. He wretches, heaves. And as Jin empties his stomach contents, Kame is there hovering above him, pulling back stray hairs
( ... )
They think it's stupid, that they have to hide, how they can't tell anyone (despite the fact everyone knows already--). They are seventeen and nineteen respectively, and it seems kind of stupid that at this teenage, exhibitionist stage of their lives, they have to hide exactly what they want to show (love love love). And it nibbles at them, at first, a little feeling in the pit of the stomach, but the nibble became a gnaw--something stronger that makes the butterflies attack with something akin to vengeance (like they really wanted those butterflies in their stomachs in the first place). And then it becomes sharp bites, chunks of their souls taken out--this is too much. They're too young for this to be worth this--to be worth the secrets and the fears and the tears and sweat
( ... )
JIN WANTS TO NANO AND KAME ENDS UP WRITING MOST OF IT FOR HIM. /going insane, yes.
You should have just thrown your dignity to the winds and nano-ed akame like me and trangai. Then we would have had 150,000 words of akame and it would have been beautiful and magnificent. *_*
Oh god, Nano. I could never ever ever ever do Nano. I've done it a couple times--I must have been 12 and 13? Maybe I did it when I was 14 too. But it's just. For me. Quantity not quality results in 50k words where at LEAST 45k of them are going to be deleted. DDD: It's just not worth my blood and sweat and tears (plus I may be the laziest person alive, SO).
...but dude, props to you. Especially if you FINISH.
Not gonna lie. Absolutely insane! Good luck, though. I expect to see what you've got as soooon as December 1st rolls around. ...or like, whenever you give up. If you do. NOT THAT I WANT YOU TO.
DIES. Akame fangirls hate pin so much more than pin fangirls hate akame. ♥
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And Akame are on the run.
Or you know, that girl!Kame snippet of yours could do some expanding on too :D
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"Kame. What did I do?"
"Jin, I don't know, but we have to go."
"Kame, I did this."
"Jin, I--"
"Kame, are you looking at this?" Jin pulls himself out of Kame's grip. "Why are you here?" He looks at the other incredulously. "Do you see me? Do you see this? Do you see--"
"Jin, you didn't mean it. Let's go," Kame pleads, grabs his arm again. "They're going to come, Jin. And we can't afford--"
"Kame," Jin says very seriously. "Kame, I just killed a man. I just blew his head off, spattered the walls and floor with blood, and--"
"Jin"Kame, I don't even remember it." He chokes, turns away reaches for a trashcan, smears blood on the bottom of his trainers in the process. He wretches, heaves. And as Jin empties his stomach contents, Kame is there hovering above him, pulling back stray hairs ( ... )
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..kinda wanna write more for it. Hahaha.
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It could be something that has to do with the paparazzi or their fears or the reactions of the people around them.
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*hugs you*
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You should have just thrown your dignity to the winds and nano-ed akame like me and trangai. Then we would have had 150,000 words of akame and it would have been beautiful and magnificent. *_*
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...but dude, props to you. Especially if you FINISH.
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I WISH I FINISH OH GOD. I am thinking of 50k of pin and going laskjflsdks >_< and that is probably my inspiration to finish right there. *petty* :|
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DIES. Akame fangirls hate pin so much more than pin fangirls hate akame. ♥
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