Comments | soucieux: [01/01] Hello, Why

soucieux

[01/01] Hello, Why

Apr 17, 2007 16:45

title. Hello, Why
pairing. akame (je)
rating. pg-13
summary. Kame tries to pull away.
author's note. sequel to Torrid Love Affair. or the sequel that NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN. only here by popular demand. :|
word count. 01990

( Kame likes the way Jin moves his hips, likes the way he licks his lips, likes the way his fingertips skim his body. He likes the way Jin's head languidly moves to the side so he can suck his neck, likes the way Jin bites his lower lip, likes the way he moans and asks for more. )

fandom: je, pairing: akame

Comments 41

konnyy April 18 2007, 00:10:17 UTC

gah. i knew akame ♥ lives on somewhere!
kame's desperateness = sufficient amount of angst to make me tingle in my fingers.
jin&kame's little game thing at the end = just enough sweet to make their relationship/story ♥
akame is probably over-written. but the way you write them is ♥ times INFINITY. AND you have literally drama-queen kame. baka-playboy jin. AMPERSAND_HEARTS_SEMICOLON!

ever consider writing jin as girly weak one? idk. b/c you seem like one who can pull eccentric things off well. only a mere suggestion/question. XD

a slight boo boo (?)...
The day that Kame leaves, Jin doesn't call a taxi. "I'll bring you hope myself," he says.
perhaps its "home" instead of hope? or am i missing something?

btw, you got my first fic comment. just thought you might want to know. AND i <3 your fics. amaJINg.

♥

soucieux April 18 2007, 01:47:40 UTC

Akame is so..not-canon-at-all but it is my OTP anyway. I'm glad you liked it. They were really--cliche. But I thought it was fun.

In my first Akame fic, Jin was on the bottom. THAT IS KIND OF ECCENTRIC. I want to try it now though. :DV

Yeah, it should be "home". I fixed it but didn't save it, I guess.

I'm glad you enjoyed and kind of sparkley at the fact that I got your first fic comment. 8D

anamuan April 18 2007, 00:11:32 UTC

I FANGIRL THIS! AND YOU!

there was lots of D: and Jin was really only just cute. I mean, really cute.

My little heart, like, died when Kame was like "he doesn't forgive you" but now it is just :DD at the cute and the hope.

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:46:01 UTC

There was too much D:. I had to end with a :D.

I'm glad you liked it. AND THAT YOUR HEART SURVIVED. ♥

314159 April 18 2007, 02:15:57 UTC

alksdfjlaskjglsdkjflaskjflakjfdlasjlakjsdlaksjfsd ok this is going in my memories ;________; this is like a cheesy romantic movie I love it so much alskjgaksjdakgasld

soucieux April 18 2007, 02:17:26 UTC

Adfkjdsfa. Clearly I am a total fag because I was like "THIS IS SO UNREALISTIC. THIS IS SO STUPID. JUST LIKE AKAME. POSTS."

chiseen April 18 2007, 02:18:41 UTC

Whee~ I loved the Torrid Love Affair, and i'm so glad you wrote a sequel!
I wish you continued and told a bit more about what happens afterwards XP
a bit confused as to how Jin acted this way.
I guess its his way of apologizing and starting over with Kame again?

Thanks for writing!! <33

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:47:00 UTC

Yep, that's about right. Jin wants to fix things so he acts like...himself (a little kid, hahaha) to try and fix things.

Thanks for commenting! ♥

snowqueenofhoth April 18 2007, 03:28:16 UTC

*flails in hysterics*

Okay, that was amazing.

But also, Jin was just like my DAD and wtf that's weird whyyyyyy do you write things like that?! >_<

Ahahahahaha, it's so laaaame and yet really awesome here and it works and AKAME is SO MUCH LOVE. LOOOOVVEEE.

*runs to work*

soucieux May 13 2007, 21:48:04 UTC

Jin is like your dad?
..I'm sorry. :Dv

Thanks~~♥