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Sep 02, 2007 17:16

Hello dears. Back again, bearing fic.

Title: Apologies
Ship: Jacob/Bella [obviously]
Rating: PG-13 for language and sex
Spoilers: Eclipse

The night before the wedding, a wolf howls outside her window.

Edward tenses, his tawny eyes flashing down to her instinctively, and Bella rises, padding barefoot to the window that hangs open to admit the slightest ( Read more... )

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kkkkaylamariex3 September 3 2007, 02:19:51 UTC
Oh, thank you. :] Apparently she wrote their awesomeness completely on accident, since 'that ship has sailed'. *rrgh*

Haha thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it!!

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slantedsunlight September 3 2007, 03:17:44 UTC
This was so realistic and perfectly paced, it almost killed me. I don't know how you mangaged to get so much into one short story, but it's just right. I love how you dealt with Edward, drawing him out of the story without a lot of detail to tangle it up, moving quickly into almost an inverted version of New Moon. Except this time it ends how it should. ♥ Bravo!

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kkkkaylamariex3 September 3 2007, 23:30:28 UTC
I'm not sure either, it looked a lot longer before I typed it up haha. Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it! :D

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apuhthetik September 3 2007, 03:56:25 UTC
Wow. I'm in love. You did a great job!

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kkkkaylamariex3 September 3 2007, 23:30:58 UTC
thank you :]

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katie_libertine September 3 2007, 04:17:29 UTC
wow that was absolutely perfect =]

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_clochette_ September 3 2007, 11:06:15 UTC
Awh, wow, beautiful. That was lovely. ♥

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