D R A B B L E C O N T E S T - r o u n d t w o

Dec 09, 2009 09:42

Because the last one was such a success, and brought so much delicious talent to light... I give you, bluesuzanne's drabble contest ROUND TWO.

R U L E S

01 Your drabble must be between 100 and 500 words.
02 Your drabble must center on the relationship between Jacob and Bella.
03 Your drabble must be posted ANONYMOUSLY to this topic. If you screw ( Read more... )

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our union is like this: | g | 498 anonymous December 9 2009, 03:02:08 UTC
Spring Break is synonymous with Cancun. At least, in college it is ( ... )

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Re: our union is like this: | g | 498 anonymous December 9 2009, 04:41:21 UTC
this is wonderful.

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Re: our union is like this: | g | 498 anonymous December 9 2009, 14:16:48 UTC
... This is absolutely gorgeous. GORGEOUS. All the lines are so picteresque and emotion-filled, and something about the parts where you have everyone wanting to know, the waitress, the truck driver, it's beautiful, it really touched a nerve!
"It sounds like waves crashing and the rumble of a motorcycle engine"
"A boy who stands tall as a cathedral, imposing and welcoming all at onceÈ
"giggling into hotel pillows" Wonderful lines!

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Re: our union is like this: | g | 498 anonymous December 10 2009, 01:55:09 UTC
something about the parts where you have everyone wanting to know, the waitress, the truck driver, it's beautiful, it really touched a nerve!

This. It's like Bella suddenly realizes what a good story it is and wants everyone to know.

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Re: our union is like this: | g | 498 anonymous December 10 2009, 10:02:00 UTC
Simply amazing.

how long it took to realize Jacob wasn’t so much a soul mate as he was an actual part of her soul - stitched tight to her own from the moment she first stepped foot in his tiny garage. She never mentions how the clumsy stitching had fallen away as they fused into one glowing being.

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